Featured Post

Book Blogger - Submit a book for review!

  Are you an author? Would you like your book promoted on my blog? and website? Would you like to have your book reviewed? If so, please con...

Monday, August 30, 2021

Interview with KB Ballentine




 Interview with KB Ballentine. Read the blog post here

Today, we have an opportunity to talk to KB Ballentine. 

KB Ballentine has written the book, Edge of the Echo.  

 

First, let me thank you for joining me.  I appreciate you giving me your links and I want to share those with our readers.

 

www.kbballentine.com

Facebook

www.irisbooks.com

Amazon.com: K. B. Ballentine: Books, Biography, Blog, Audiobooks, Kindle


 

That is great.  Can you tell us a little about yourself and what led you to start writing?

 

I have never NOT written. I learned to read before I went to school, and I always made up stories to share by voice until I could write. I went to college to receive my English degree, and my parents asked what I was planning to do for a living. Well, reality hits hard when you’re not receiving a paycheck, and I took a few more classes to get my teaching certificate.

 

These days I teach DE English classes and theatre to high school students and moonlight at a local college by teaching night classes. And, of course, I write. And read. And read about writing.


What was the first piece you ever wrote?

 

I wrote many short stories, probably more like flash fiction but that wasn’t a category when I was a kid, but the first “big” piece I wrote was a romance novel when I was in 8th grade. Ha! I laugh about that now, thinking I knew anything about romance at that age!

 

I can only imagine what it would be like if someone went back and retrieved my writing from middle and high school. Think I wrote a poem called "There is a bug on my toilet," probably the middle school boy equivalent to a romance novel.


I continued to write and eventually applied to get my master’s degree where I took fiction writing classes. I had already decided I probably didn’t have the stamina and persistence to write a novel, so I was focused on short stories. That was a nightmare! I found myself in a class with a professor and fellow students who delighted in tearing apart everyone’s work.


That can be really difficult, especially if the criticism seems more mean and bitter than uplifting and encouraging. There is a way to be nice and a way to discourage people from writing.


I received my degree but was licking my wounds from that class when I noticed I hadn’t been teaching poetry to my students. When I first began teaching, the other teachers were incredibly helpful with material and insight to the classroom, so I was bewildered when I realized I had no information about poetry.

 

Peppering my colleagues with questions, I was finally told by one: “I don’t teach poetry because it’s subjective; there’s no real way to grade it.” Well, I immediately went out and found books about “how to teach writing to teenagers.”


That sounds like it was a really motivating moment for you.

 

Now, I’m the kind of teacher who wants to make sure she can do the work she asks of her students, so I read through several of the books, did the exercises, and found, wonder of wonders, that I enjoyed writing those poems.

 

This was the intersection where I turned to poetry. 

 

Where do you get your inspiration for your writing? Do you have hobbies you enjoy and inspire you?

 

So many of my hobbies revolve around language: reading, theatre, listening to stories, but I also enjoy physical activities like hiking, swimming, dancing, and, once upon a time, sword fighting.

 

Often times young writers - meaning young in their writing career rather than age necessarily - seem overwhelmed by the idea of publishing something. What advice would you give anyone considering moving to publication?


Keep writing, keep workshopping, keep sending your work for publication. Never give up.

 

Please tell us about your current release.


Edge of the Echo is divided into four sections that honor the ancient rhythms of Earth, Air, Water, and Fire. Edge of the Echo explores these elements and how they weave through the human experience and, though we are encompassed by them every day, we don’t fully understand them. At the threshold of each season there is a mystic balance between the stones and the stars. The early Celts recognized what we have forgotten: the seasons of the year reflect an invisible geography between nature and the human soul. In this world full of upheaval and clatter, we need more than ever the tenacity of nature – its magic and variety that mends our weariness. This collection of poems invites the elements to speak to us once again.




 

Can you give us a sample?

 

Summer Solstice Promise

 

Mountains shift as mist ghosts

 the ridge, spools the river. 

Heat licks the sky, velvet-shirred, 

 atoms cracking, dividing

right before our eyes. In the valley, 

 heartwood trembles.

Fireflies flare the dusty road, blinking 

 hope in this unfolding night.

 

 


That is great. I love the line about fireflies. Growing up in the south, they pull up so many experiences and life memories. 


One thing I always ask authors I interview is who influenced you?


Some of my favorite authors are David Whyte, John O’Donohue, Mary Oliver, Jane Kenyon, Eavan Boland, Robert Macfarlane, Edwin Way Teale, Ron Rash, Bill Brown, Diane Frank, and, oh, I could go on and on. There are so many good writers out there, and I want to read them all! 

 

That would make a great "to-read" list. Do you buy a lot of books to read?


The best money I ever spent as a writer is on other authors’ work, most especially ones who are working/writing currently. I have never regretted buying books from fellow writers.


That is awesome. As a writer, how do you balance your time?

 

My writer’s kryptonite is too much or not enough time. I always think I want more time to write, but, when I have more time, I squander it. When I am super-busy I get even less work done because I’m usually too stressed to write. My most prolific writing is done when I am on a regular schedule and in a routine.  

 

Writing has never really been difficult for me, but I don’t really relish the time I spend sending my work out for publication. A good rule of thumb for poets is to have about one-third (or more) of your collection already published singly in contemporary journals/e-zines/lit mags. Sitting down and turning on my business brain to submit my work in the varying formats required by each publisher is nowhere near as fun as using my creative brain. It’s probably that way for most writers.


Are you involved in any writer's groups?

 

I have been involved with many writers’ groups over the years that meet monthly such as the Chattanooga Writers’ Guild, Rhyme-n-Chatt, the Knoxville Writers’ Guild, Tennessee Mountain Writers, Inc, and I also have personal writing groups where I meet with a fewer number of people more often. I think it’s a good idea to run your work past other people: you don’t have to take their advice/suggestions, but it’s always good to see your work through other sets of eyes/ears.

 

One more time, where can someone go to purchase your book?

www.irisbooks.com

Amazon.com: K. B. Ballentine: Books, Biography, Blog, Audiobooks, Kindle


Thank you and good luck!

Monday, August 23, 2021

Review: Audrey by Sean-Paul Thomas

You can buy the book HERE

 Audrey by Sean-Paul Thomas does something I love to see in fiction. It flips a story on its head. Joe, a blue collar plumber is out of jail and looking to make amends with his ex and connect with his daughter. It looks to be a heart-warming story of redemption. Then enters Audrey.

 

Meeting her in a chance encounter, Joe is pulled into her world. At first, it appears Audrey is a one night fling till her muddling around and forwarding Joe’s personal work to her email opens another door. Joe is catapulted into a crazy, fun world with Audrey, even if he is an oddball in her world. Or as Audrey puts it, “some kind of dancing windmill on a pogo stick.”

 

Learning who Joe is in Audrey’s world means figuring out who he is in any world. The whirlwind of a romance with a woman in the entertainment industry twenty years Joe’s age is fun to read and Sean-Paul does dialogue well. There is more language and sexuality than I normally read, but it always fits the scene, character development, and moves the plot along to what is a satisfactory if not surprising end.

 

As Joe would say “Cheers, big ears. And thanks for having me here.” The book draws you in and gives you a journey that is fun and worthwhile. 


You can buy the book HERE

Wednesday, August 18, 2021

New Flash Fiction Anthology: Influx, Oh Flux

The Corner Scribblers are producing their newest flash fiction anthology: Influx, Oh Flux. Each story is less than 1000 words and the book is designed to be in the realm of "90 minute reads." It costs less than a few bucks, supports local (Chattanooga, TN and North Georgia) artists, and has some really cool stories in it. Mine involves a modernization of an old norse seeress tale.

It is the 7th in the series and Influx, Oh Flux has an invasion theme. It includes stories by  William Joseph Roberts(Author), M. K. Waller (Author), Piotr Mierzejewski (Author), Philip K Booker (Author), Heather Booker (Author), Reggi Broach (Author), Isaac Craft (Author), Kale Sastre (Author), Michael Gants (Author).

It is put out by Three Ravens who published my urban fantasy: Twelve Hours on the Block:

BUY TWELVE HOUR ON THE BLOCK HERE


Harwood steps onto the stage with his keen sense of horror intact in this new novel.

-Grady Harp, top 100 Amazon Reviewer


Also, read some great stories from solid local authors like my kilt wearing friend friend William Joseph Roberts

  

BUY STARFLIGHT HERE                      BUY WILDCAT HERE

Or my farmstead friend J. D. Beckwith whom I have reviewed here previously 

BUY eConscious Beta HERE

Or Regigi Broach's The Defender Series.


BUY The Mission HERE


Audible listener? Try our previous volume with a wicked cover: Bugged Out Babblings

BUY BUGGED OUT BABBLINGS on Audible HERE


Give Influx, Oh Flux or another Corner Scribblers title a try today! Our writer's group strive to make each other better. We edit, bleed, discuss, go to conferences and teach each other what we learn, encourage, and strive to be better writers. I think Influx, Oh Flux shows that to be true.



Monday, August 16, 2021

Review: James Ruvalcaba's The Light Through The Pouring Rain


 Enter the free giveaway HERE

The Light Through The Pouring Rain is a memoir of a young couple battling a cancer diagnosis. James Ruvalcaba, the surviving husband, tells the story of his lost partner, Anabel. As you would expect by this summary and the title, the book deals with tragedy. In fact, the prelude sets out the normative stages of grief with a brief word from the author. The book reads quickly from stage to stage. 


Most of us have someone we love carry a diagnosis of cancer and many of the vignettes – perhaps that is the best phrase for the chapters – drew me back to my own experiences as I walked through terminal cancers of my father and mother-in-law as well as my mom’s successful battle with brain cancer. 

The scene about the hair cut and that moment where a woman must shave her head was particularly touching. In other chapters the author gives transparency about he and Anabel’s sex life, how their social life shifted and then closed, and that often experienced last vacation together in the midst of the diagnosis and rollercoaster of treatment. Jame’s prose are easy to read and engaging because they are honest. 

He shares how he felt in the moment, how Anabel experienced her journey, and their ups and downs. 

There are moments of “What the f**k is going on here? Why does it feel like we’re going backward and she’s getting worse, not better?” 

There are also moments of James telling her “I will always love you always and forever. I promise this to you, that I will make sure people know who you are and your story.” As memoirs go this one is both gritty and well written on a topic many can find connection.


I was given a copy of the book for review in conjunction with Lola’s Blog Tours. The opinions are my own. See my review on AMAZON here.


 @lolasblogtours on Twitter, Facebook and Instagram. 


--------------------------------------------------

Bookstagram Blitz The Light Through the Pouring Rain by James Ruvalcaba

 

This is my stop during the bookstagram blitz for The Light Through the Pouring Rain by James Ruvalcaba. This memoir is a true story about a young couple’s battle with cancer.

 

This bookstagram blitz is organized by Lola's Blog Tours and runs from 16 till 22 August. See the tour schedule here: http://www.lolasblogtours.net/bookstagram-blitz-the-light-through-the-pouring-rain-by-james-ruvalcaba

 

Don’t miss the tour wide giveaway! 5 winners will a $10 Amazon gift card. You can enter the giveaway at the bottom of this post.

 

The Light Through the Pouring Rain

By James Ruvalcaba

Genre: Non-fiction Memoir

 

Blurb:

My story is about my Fiancee Anabel and I as we experienced the trials and tribulations of a Cancer treatment. We both were in our twenties when this diagnosis halted our lives plans. With no clear road map on how to navigate through our new normal, we proceeded into uncharted territory, hand-in-hand, with the love of our families and our faith in God to guide us.

 

Links:

- Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/58744200-the-light-through-the-pouring-rain

- Bookbub: https://www.bookbub.com/books/the-light-through-the-pouring-rain-by-james-ruvalcaba

- Amazon: https://www.amazon.com/Light-Through-Pouring-Rain-ebook/dp/B08PF23TF1/

 

You can watch the book trailer here on Youtube: https://youtu.be/CSlRECKmS2Y

 


 

About the Author:

Hello, I'm James Ruvalcaba. I am the Author of “The Light Through the Pouring Rain.”

I am a family man and hold them near and dear to me. I am a down to Earth person that loves creating conversations. I believe the more we communicate the more we see the beauty of God's previous workings. In pursuit of my God given mission I began writing because of a promise I made to my Fiance on her last day. I wanted to honor my fiance's legacy and to be a testimony of God's goodness. I continue to tell stories and hope to achieve telling stories that uplift others, give some perspective on life and to walk away with a  sense of inspiration. If they can take lessons and perspectives given in my words to their own lives then I feel I accomplished what I set out to do.

 

Author links:

- Website: https://thelightthroughthepouringrain.com/

- Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/james.ruvalcaba.39/

- Twitter: https://twitter.com/JamesMruvalcaba

- Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/20998695.James_Ruvalcaba

- Amazon: https://www.amazon.com/James-Ruvalcaba/e/B08QNGXVCB/

- Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/jamesmruvalcaba/  

 

 

Giveaway

There is a tour wide giveaway for the bookstagram blitz for The Light Through the Pouring Rain. Five winners will each win a $10 Amazon gift card.

 

You can enter the giveaway here: https://smarturl.it/LightThroughTheRain



See the author on other social media:
 @jamesmruvalcaba on Instagram, @JamesMruvalcaba on Twitter and @ames.ruvalcaba.39 on Facebook.



Interview: Steve Frederick

Read the full Interview Here

 Today, we have an opportunity to talk to Steve Frederick.  Steve has written the books, Breakfast of Superheroes and Secrets of The Ring.  

 

First, let me thank you for joining me.  I appreciate you giving me your links and I want to share those with our readers.

 


I now have the URL, and the website will be completed in the next couple of weeks. The URL is http://www.thunderboltstories.com/


Steve's Website

 

That is great.  Can you tell us a little about yourself and what led you to start writing?

 

I was “writing” before I learned to write. A neighbor, who was a teacher, had my brother and I over sometimes during the summer. My older brother would write, while I would dictate stories to her. I wrote stories in grade school and high school, but put that behind me when I went to college. 


I had a similar journey. I even won a creative writing award in high school but stopped in college. What led you back to story writing?


Toastmasters International, a public speaking group, reawakened my love of crafting stories. At first, I struggled. My speeches were rather flat, and I was terrified to get up in front of the room. But I stuck with it, and after a while, it paid off. My speech about Harvey Haddix, a real-life, star-crossed pitcher who pitched a perfect game for 12 innings, but still lost the game ☹ excited audiences and won me second place in the entire Chicago area in the TM International Speech Contest. I’ve turned that into a picture book, “The Greatest Game Ever Pitched.” I hope to publish that soon. 

 

Then, my son was born, and there was no time for Toastmasters. But soon, my son presented me with another story-telling opportunity. I loved sharing stories with him, both with and without books. We spent many glorious afternoons sitting in the board book section of the library reading and then taking home piles of books. 

 

Then, one morning, I was tired and uninspired, and didn’t really feel up to telling yet another story. I told (my son) I just couldn’t remember any more stories. Without batting an eye, he said, “Well, then make some up!”


When he got into day care, I had the unenviable job of getting him up in the morning, feeding him breakfast, and getting him to school. He was a real grouch in the morning, but I soon figured out that telling him stories made him less grouchy. He loved superheroes, and having taken in my share of superhero comic books and TV shows as a kid, I told him stories I remembered about Batman, Spiderman, Daredevil, the Hulk, and Superman. Then, one morning, I was tired and uninspired, and didn’t really feel up to telling yet another story. I told him I just couldn’t remember any more stories. Without batting an eye, he said, “Well, then make some up!”

 

So, I created a number of characters, the best of which was based on him, and eventually morphed into the hero of my books, the superhero named Cockroach. He loved hearing stories about himself. When he got into kindergarten, we had our first “Readers are Leaders” day at school. That’s the day parents come to read a book to the kids. I decided to write down one of my stories about him and shared it with the class. When I’d finished, a boy in the front of the room gushed, “That’s the best superhero story ever!” When I go back and read it, that version wasn’t great, but I think the kids were fascinated to hear about a superhero their age. With that encouragement, I kept writing.

 

The problem was that I was looking to my son as a model for my character, and he kept getting older and changing. It was like trying to hit a moving target. The character kept getting older until I finally froze him at age 11.        

 

 

It sounds like you get a lot of inspiration from raising your son. Where else do you find inspiration?


Obviously, most of the inspiration comes from superhero comics and TV programs. As a kid, I loved the Superman, Spiderman and especially, the mysterious Batman. But I also have been influenced by things like Harry Potter and The Muppets—kids stories which don’t bore adults. We adults endure a lot of books and movies that kids love, but we find to be just dreadful. I’ve always strived to make them enjoyable for adults as well—and quite a few adults have read the books and enjoyed them.  

 

What advice would you give someone who wants to be a writer?

 

Begin. Nothing is more intimidating than a blank page. Write something. No matter how bad it may seem. It is amazing how quickly bad can turn into good and even great with a couple or a few revisions. I just have to force myself to begin. 

 

Keep at it. The first piece you write will probably not be outstanding, but don’t let that stop you, if you have something to say. Tell your story. 

 

I mentioned Toastmasters International, the public speaking group. I went there to learn public speaking. At first, both the content and the delivery of my speeches were mediocre at best. But after getting up in front of the group again and again and again, my speechwriting and my delivery got better. Then a lot better. And then, one day, when I was standing in front of the group giving a speech, I was amazed to look at the audience and realize that they were hanging on every word.

 

What is the best advice you have ever been given as a writer?

 

My dad said, “Write and rewrite and rewrite and rewrite.” 

 

 

That is good advice. Keep at a work. So many authors who send me work have clearly finished a first draft and that is a major achievement. However, their work suffers because they never went back over it. Editing can be the bane for many authors who love to write. What is your favorite part about writing?


My favorite part of writing is feeling the brain’s creativity. I love the way the mind works when I’m really focusing on something. The flashes of inspiration come more frequently the more I work on the books. I’ll have a dream about a character or an idea will flash into my mind while I’m sitting in church or taking the dog for a walk. I enjoy creating characters and getting in touch with them, who they are, and what’s important to them. They come alive in my mind and I’m constantly thinking of challenges they might face. How would this character react to this situation? What happens when these two are in a room together? 

 

 

Please tell us about your current release.


The Secrets of the Magic Ring is the second book in a series. In the first book, Kyle Alexander, a clumsy and scared kid, finds a magic ring in a cereal box. It won’t come off his finger, no matter how he pulls and tugs on it. And the ring gets him into trouble. Kyle tries to get up the courage to face criminals and eventually comes face to face with the meanest, nastiest crook in the city. When he does, he’s not sure his magic ring is on his side. His story is everyman’s/everywoman’s story: overcoming his fears to use his powers.  

 

In the second book, Kyle’s newly-discovered courage evaporates in a heartbeat when he learns that Kodiak Bearenski and the Grizzly Bear Gang are out to hurt superheroes. The nasty Kodiak already put one superhero in the hospital. Kyle is scared and frustrated. Although his magic ring is a twin of the ring worn by the great superhero, Captain Nightmare, Kyle has gotten none of The Captain’s super strength. Kyle learns that the two magic rings are very different, and he must figure out—in a hurry— what his powers are and how to use them. He fears that using those powers will put his own life in danger. But superheroes may die if he doesn't!

 

Can you read us a small exert? 

 

It was the dead of night. Downtown Chicago was quiet and nearly deserted when the roar of an engine shattered the silence. A black van sped east across Michigan Avenue. It crashed through the majestic arched glass doorway of the Markiss Neemun store, sending glass flying in all directions. The van’s doors burst open and four figures dressed in furry grizzly bear costumes leaped out. The Grizzly Bear Gang was striking again. 

 

The tall, broad-shouldered driver barked orders as the gang fanned out, clutching large trash bags. They stuffed shoes, purses, jewelry, dresses, and suits into the bags and tossed them into the back of the van. In a few short minutes, the van was crammed full of bags of overpriced merchandise.

 

They slammed shut the van’s back doors and jumped back into their seats – except for the driver. He turned to face the security camera, removed the head and gloves of his grizzly bear costume, and gestured at the camera. Then, reaching inside his bear outfit, he pulled out a handful of glittery dust and tossed it into the air. Finally, he too leaped into his seat, slammed the door, and hit the gas. With a squeal of tires, the van turned around and smashed what was left of the doorway on the way out. 

 

That is great! What exciting story are you working on next?

 

The next story in the series is The Bangle Bombers Blast Banks. In this story, two shadowy figures blast their way into bank vaults throughout the city, and disappear without a trace—except they leave behind a bangle. Police and superheroes alike are utterly baffled, especially since many of them don’t know what a bangle is. Kyle and his best friend try to crack the case. As he does, he has to deal with his Grammy, who has become hugely suspicious of his strange behavior and vows to get to the bottom of it.  

 

Who are your favorite authors? 


There are many, of course. Here are a few.

 

Sandra Cisneros—I love the simplicity and power with which she writes.

 

Mark Twain—I read Tom Sawyer and Huck Finn more than once as a kid, and then later as an adult. I often think of them and their relationship when I write about my superhero character, Kyle Alexander, and his best friend, Carlos Santana. 

 

Lemony Snicket – The wacky, absurdity of his books and the persistence of Count Olaf as he tries to steal the fortune of three orphan kids kept my son and hooked through all thirteen volumes.

 

J.K. Rowling—The queen of kids’ books (that adults also love). My son and I read all seven of the Harry Potter series together as well. I’m in awe of how she managed to write about a character who gets a year older in each book, and still hold her audience. I’ve thought about trying that with my books, but I think I won’t. I have strived to emulate the way she appeals to adults in a kids’ book.

 

Pearl Buck—My wife and I were both spellbound as she took us into the world of Chinese society and the struggles of peasant farmers. Sadly, I was unable to interest my son in her work. 

 

Bob Kane and Bill Finger, who created Batman, my all-time favorite superhero. My character’s encounter with Rocky the Rat in the first book and the Grizzly Bear Gang in the second, draw heavily from the tone of the Batman stories. 

 

And Pablo Picasso. I know he was an artist, not a writer, but his Don Quixote inspired me. In this picture, he expressed so much with just a few lines. I’ve tried to do that in my writing.

 Don Quijote

 

 

 

 

One thing I always find interesting is how indie authors are networking. Are you involved in any writer groups?

 

I’ve been a member of a critique group for twelve years. Members have come and gone, but each has been a strong influence and source of creativity and fellowship. It continues to fascinate me to see how various people’s perspectives and their life experiences contribute to the discussions and feedback to help improve. Their comments continue to surprise me. They often tell me things I never would have thought of in a hundred years.  Here’s three examples:  

 

 

Ø  I had a scene where a female superhero had a call of nature and had to go to the bathroom at a critical crime-fighting moment. I thought it would be funny because, well, superheroes NEVER go to the bathroom in stories. It was an arbitrary choice to have that female character be the one who inopportunely needs a bathroom break, but some of the women took it as an insult to women, so I took it out. 

 

Ø  Another pointed out to me that the rage one character directed at another didn’t make sense. So, I had to create a reason for that rage. I believe this enriched the character tremendously. 

 

Ø  In a picture book I wrote, a character tears down the cords on the window blinds to use them as rope. Someone pointed out that those cords are a strangulation hazard and people might be upset. 

 

Anything additional you want to share with the readers? 

 

A good editor can make all the difference in the world. I was developing my superhero stories over a period of years. I knew a 4th and 5th grade teacher and asked if he would read them to his class and get their feedback. He agreed and I sent him a draft of my first book. He was amazed. He said the kids were so enthralled that they didn’t even want to interrupt the story to go to gym class. “That’s unheard of!” he raved. 

 

With that encouragement, I kept working on it. Some months later, I sent him a “new and improved” version to read to a different class of students. I expected that he would tell me the kids loved this even more. They didn’t. He’s always very honest with me, and said, “It didn’t go so well. I read a couple of chapters and didn’t get the sense that they were into it. I asked the kids to give the story a thumbs up, thumbs down, or thumbs sideways. Most of the kids gave it a thumbs sideways, and there were more thumbs down than thumbs up, so we stopped reading.” Ouch!

 

Well, I worked on it some more, but was really struggling to find my way. Someone in my critique group told me about a great editor named Pamela Dell. I got in touch and told her I’d send her my latest draft for her feedback. But then, just before I got off the phone with her, I mentioned my experience with the very different feedback from two classes—one group loved the story; the second was utterly indifferent. Her ears perked up. “Really? Why don’t you send me the earlier version as well?”

 

She read them both and told me that my story had gone off the rails when I made my “improvements.” She suggested that I go back to the old version, and gave me some suggestions for improvement. This included giving my character’s best friend, Carlos, a much stronger role in the story. I thought this would be a lot of work, but when I sat down at the keyboard, Carlos quickly came to life without a lot of effort. He’s now a huge player in the superhero stories. 


Very true and draws us back to your dad's advice: “Write and rewrite and rewrite and rewrite.” 

Thanks for being with us today. Let me remind our readers where they can find you:


Steve's Website


FACEBOOK



 

Monday, August 9, 2021

Review: Akin by Robin Murarka


 I was given a free copy of this book to review. Since I like books that take time to world build

You can find the book HERE on AMAZON

 I picked it up. Below is my review:

The opening prologue does a wonderful job setting the tone of the novel as we read of a man who wakes to a nightmarish vision and the belief he had taken his own son’s life. The end of the prologue sets the reader with an interesting question regarding the purpose of tears. “Perhaps it was pain, or perhaps it was beauty. You will learn, as you get older, that a man can cry for both.”

 

From there we meet Aydan, a man who is frequented by dreams. We learn of Jacub and the effort to remove his mind of possession, finally leading to an experience called the Ascendance, ironically in a pit. It is word images such as this that really draw the brilliance of the narrative. The author does well building a world and introducing ideas such as Kinda, Saal-Ind, Fayem, and a great tree in the center of the world.

 


Overall, the story loosely follows the Hero’s Journey model with a bit of an existential twist. As Aydan leaves his known existence he ventures out, finding himself at one point in a cave with the hurt Samaye and… something shuffling in the darkness. He assumes the name Akin when he meets Kaius though the text leads the reader through the conflict of the new and old identity. He travels to a temple city and an oracle. Aydan / Akin continually expands his world to one much larger than himself, though the opening prologue continues to resonate with each dark night, each moment of reflection or tears. 


There are several nods to great epic moments in literature with chapters such as the Leviathan or Midas (though no literal reincarnation of either) followed by a fight. The author’s fight narrative was perhaps the highlight of the book for me with prose such as “They fight as we predicted they would… a bloodthirsty ary. They burn far too bright, and cannot last the course of this war” and one of my favorites, “You did not die in hiding, my friend.”

 

I won’t give spoilers here, but in a good Heroes’ Journey form, Aydan / Akin returns home to his father and to see if there can be a place for the new person he has come to be or if he would have to leave.

 

Overall, the writing is concise and clear, without long drawn-out sentences. This makes the philosophical aspects of the book easy to digest and integrate well with the action and aspects of journey. If you like stories dependent on world building where the reality of human nature are not glossed over, this is a great read.

 

I was given a copy of the book for review. The opinions are my own.