tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5347115912437393716.post7539820261330966293..comments2023-04-04T04:25:12.155-07:00Comments on Jerry's Circumlocution: Interview and Review: Golem by PD AllevaJerry Harwoodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01203899270627234313noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5347115912437393716.post-6853038935717099052022-09-27T07:22:19.987-07:002022-09-27T07:22:19.987-07:00Tried to read GOLEM, but put it down. Too much unn...Tried to read GOLEM, but put it down. Too much unnecessary out-of -the-gate description of street scenes and trees, plus very awkward, unorthodox sentence structures, really turned me off. If Mr. Alleva has an editor, he should fire him/her. The story may be great, but to me- a language teacher and writer myself- I couldn't get past the clumsy incomplete sentences. Maybe they were done for effect? Not sure; the only effect it had on me was nausea.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com